Hi Sam! How are you? I hope you are managing well. This is a tough year isn’t it? It would be good to go for a short trip to relax
As you know, the school holidays are coming and so is my birthday. I went to Jetabout Travel yesterday and picked up a 2 days 1 night Malacca Treat tour itinerary. I was hoping you could accompany me to celebrate my birthday. The trip is from 3rd to 4th March. We will be departing from Golden Mile Complex at 8 am. There would also be breakfast at the famous Roti Canai Café on the way to Malacca and we would arrive there by 11am. The sightseeing places we would go include visits to Malacca’s historic sites as well as a tour of Jonker Walk. Do bring some extra money for we will be shopping at Mahkota Parade, one of the largest mall in Malacca. The activities for day two includes breakfast at Mahkota Parade Hotel. The rest of the day will be free and easy before we depart for home at 3pm. The last day of booking is 28th February. Please call me if you can go or email back to me your reply. You will need to pay $100 for the trip.
I hope you can go. It has been ages since we went for a holiday together. I am looking forward to it. Do reply soon! Bye!
Your friend,
Joreen
As you know, the school holidays are coming and so is my birthday. I went to Jetabout Travel yesterday and picked up a 2 days 1 night Malacca Treat tour itinerary. I was hoping you could accompany me to celebrate my birthday. The trip is from 3rd to 4th March. We will be departing from Golden Mile Complex at 8 am. There would also be breakfast at the famous Roti Canai Café on the way to Malacca and we would arrive there by 11am. The sightseeing places we would go include visits to Malacca’s historic sites as well as a tour of Jonker Walk. Do bring some extra money for we will be shopping at Mahkota Parade, one of the largest mall in Malacca. The activities for day two includes breakfast at Mahkota Parade Hotel. The rest of the day will be free and easy before we depart for home at 3pm. The last day of booking is 28th February. Please call me if you can go or email back to me your reply. You will need to pay $100 for the trip.
I hope you can go. It has been ages since we went for a holiday together. I am looking forward to it. Do reply soon! Bye!
Your friend,
Joreen
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- All content points covered.
- Mandatory paragraphs present (Opening formalities, Content and Closing)
Well done Joreen!
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